Woww. Loved it, lots.
Amazing choice of words, and I loved how you arranged them.
The description, imagery, and all was amazing, along with the flow.
Absolutely amazing. :]
5/5

You know what, no matter what you write, it will never be bad. So you need to take pride in your work missy.

I loved the repetition of the first stanza, and the first stanza just happened to be my favorite stanza too, so that was just like a bonus, lol.

5.5
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<3

Honestly you don't find poems to be your best but the people who read them thing 'Wow what another amazing poem' It is poems like this that really make me love reading your poetry and also why I have you on my favorites.

I've always said, "Follow your heart,"
But what if that isn't the best for you?
You're like the drug, and I, the addict,
But your taste is getting stale; it's nothing new.

Definitly the best lines throughout this entire piece. Deep and capturing which stuck in my head from the start and repeating it at the end was definitly a good idea as it kept it in my head. Loved this. ~Mel