Chelsey
Great job! Wouldn't it be wonderful if things were like we wised them to be :)

Take care love Cindy

Chelsey,
"The first day on a brand new planet
Is what it feels like whenever you're near
There are no frowns, no cries, or angry faces
Its just smiles and laughs in the atmosphere"

^Wouldn't that be a great place to live.

Well done with your imagery.

Always,
Jeannie

Wow!..this is amazing, continue to write

HOLY geeze a MOLY i love thsi poem it is so cute really i like how in a way u have places hwere it cna ryhm but u chose for it not to and it sounded so cute again i loved it

I like this... I feel like this with someone right now... 5/5

You must really love this guy. i got my love back and got my inspiration back as well so soon i'll be writin up my poems again.

So freaking good, no corrections. keep it up. i love to see poems like this, that draws u in because of an interesting title, and then throws you off the moment u read the poem. because at first i thought this poem was about space, and i was like hmm lets see, but then it was about love. and i totally get it, and i totally love it
-Writer

Okay, i feel that this poem could be a little better, but overall its pretty good!!

nice job,
kelly

Great job this poem was so cute loved it ! xx-

Omgsh i loved it! I really felt it in my heart...
Good luck with your new boyfriend i hope i read more about your relationship
Keep righting, Erika