Battered and broken
Beaten to the core
the only thing to hide my pain
Was that stupid smile I wore.
I love that part, well-written. and great
poem. 5/5.

^i agree

Battered and broken
Beaten to the core
the only thing to hide my pain
Was that stupid smile I wore.

i loved that too!! wow, you have a way with words.... greatt job! i love reading your poems, because you always do such a great job... 5/5 from me

I really like this one. its really good. it flows pretty good too! 5/5

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becca