Again excellently written, only thing I could see that could improve this is to leave out the shorcuts like cuz they can really damage the flow of a poem, and they make it look unprofessional. it just looks and sounds better if it all spelled out, other than that the word choice was excellent, the flow was great, and the emtion was deep. 5/5

Its pretty good but i think it should b more spaced out the in one big stanza and you should change the cuz because its not really propper unless u put it into the slang then its ok