Tick Tock

by ari   May 30, 2007


Intricate stories of lustful love
are winding their spindly fingers
around the hands of time,
each hour passing by without a chime.
Not a whisper, not a sound;
unheard is the soft voice of emotions never found.
Tender hearts and saddened eyes,
remain fragile from the lies;
wounds and bruises spot the skin,
scarring the shell she takes refuge in.
Hiding from the world outside,
the Truth she just cannot abide.
She allows this stopping of the clock,
knowing that the pieces of her life are always kept in stock.
The ticks of the second hand come to a halt,
while she tries to convince herself that there are no faults.
Says she: 'His character is strong'
but the hurt will come before too long.
The mother-of-pearl face crashes onto the floor,
and of time: there is no more.
She must hurry, and erase the pain he's caused,
because slowly, the minutes will become unpaused.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    I really liked the image this poem gave... but like a friend of mine, i think you use too many large and descriptive words together.

    description is good but i think what i'm saying is that sometimes it can be too much for the image.

    otherwise, i love how this poem was very frank yet very vague. i guess one of those poems where you could make it what you will in some sense. overall, it was very well written.

    you have a real knack for making me see a picture when i read.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow! beautifully written and emostion pack that kept me hooked till the end! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Lol sorry before i meant beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Wow this is so beaustiful!!! thankyou for writing this!! :):)