This is actually very good! I love the content and how you expressed your feelings...

Again, I might take this one and break the lines in half and divide them into stanzas if you want.

You also have the lower case "i" thing in this one.

the fifth line from the bottom, the first word should be "it" not "its"

Very Very well done!

hey great poem

I really enjoy this poem, its very well written and good, keep up your wonderful writting! if you could, would you comment on mine?
Thanks,
Sarah

That was really good. Check out mine sometime. Keep up the great work!
<3 Aubs

More than a poem this is a real issue for many teens. I myself, I've felt that way before and now I feeel the same way again, think things twice before taking a decision I know I will, cause I don't want to hurt my boyfriend but his kisses just don't feel the same . So I know that I could prevent him from suffering now but later it will be worst.think about it.

you are a very good writer.

That was just wow well i hope it only gets better and keep up the writing it was really good 5/5

Soo beautiful !!
Nice writing.

xxx

Your poems sounds cool, can u view and comment on mine too?

Waiting 4 you there

Ayy foo you gotz nice poems....better then mines,peace out..