The Door

by BrokenREALiTy   May 31, 2007


And it's like days like today,
In which I'm grateful for.
I'm tired of waiting now,
So I'll see myself out the door.

I've given you long enough,
And yet you still won't decide.
I know what's lying in your heart,
So you have nothing left to hide.

Don't try denying that it's her,
I know that she's the one.
I was just too afraid to face it,
That she really won.

So here I am helping you,
Now you don't have to make a choice.
I've confirmed what you couldn't,
And given your heart a voice.

Though I'm sorry for what could've been,
I won't say any more.
I'll leave you two to yourselves,
And see myself to the door.
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwz thats rele good...but its sad i hope that rele didnt happen to u!

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    To be honest (and we all want honest comments, don't we?) I've read a thousand love poems similar to this one. They're all clishes, and I can't see the real emotions in them anymore. That's just my opinion, anyway.
    Sorry, I won't rate this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Strength was felt behind the words this is an amazing piece of work

    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by ChaoticallyMe

    Good stuff...I also see similarities from your ideas to mine. This one reminds me of one of my own. Thanks for the correction to my poem and the R&C.

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    How poignant. I adored how you brought into play a sturdy voice and ambiance throughout the poem, along with the sportsmanship in a love unrequited, which invariably coordinated with every aspect of this work. There are times when I sensed the need for certain lines to be tightened up, in order to enhance its flow. But it's no big deal, really. I think you've written this quite well and sound. Thanks for sharing! ~Marian

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