Wow. lovely. I love the mood and attitude in this poem.. its like im tough, and i dont need you attitude! you have now made it in my favorites. great job

5/5.

Great poem. I think that I would have done the same thing. This poem also had a nice flow. So I gave it a 5/5.

Wow, im speechless reading this poem as i can honestly relate to it.
you have shared a great one that im sure everyone like it. as always, your every poem is so great, and nothing less than a 5/5

This says all I ever wanted to say to a certain person....to the last word. Kuddos on a great piece of work. 5/5 out of me

Aaaahh. i loved your poem flow of words was so easy to read great work taek care 5/5

Wow!!!...great poem!..i loved the choice of words..n the poem floed well too..n i liked the kind of style you used to express this one..i can relate to it too..
Great job!
xxPoojaxx

"I've confirmed what you couldn't,
And given your heart a voice."

love it. great job!
heartbreak sucks... but, it's the only way to get to the "one."
good luck!

How poignant. I adored how you brought into play a sturdy voice and ambiance throughout the poem, along with the sportsmanship in a love unrequited, which invariably coordinated with every aspect of this work. There are times when I sensed the need for certain lines to be tightened up, in order to enhance its flow. But it's no big deal, really. I think you've written this quite well and sound. Thanks for sharing! ~Marian

Good stuff...I also see similarities from your ideas to mine. This one reminds me of one of my own. Thanks for the correction to my poem and the R&C.

Strength was felt behind the words this is an amazing piece of work

laura

To be honest (and we all want honest comments, don't we?) I've read a thousand love poems similar to this one. They're all clishes, and I can't see the real emotions in them anymore. That's just my opinion, anyway.
Sorry, I won't rate this one.

Awwz thats rele good...but its sad i hope that rele didnt happen to u!