Not knowing

by Kaylee   May 31, 2007


&& there you go walking past
our eyes meet for just a fast flash
of what we both knew we couldnt have
not knowing we were both what the other was wanting

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Not knowing we were both what the other was wanting

    good work. short bu nice. you have talent. you should carry on nice work. ..
    oneday you will become more good writers.
    take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    I liked this poem. It was short and the rhyme scheme was confusing, but it was very good, I could picture what was going on and the emotions taking place. It was very relate able, as well. Good job! 4/5 keep up the good work

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