I liked this poem. It was short and the rhyme scheme was confusing, but it was very good, I could picture what was going on and the emotions taking place. It was very relate able, as well. Good job! 4/5 keep up the good work

Not knowing we were both what the other was wanting

good work. short bu nice. you have talent. you should carry on nice work. ..
oneday you will become more good writers.
take care
5/5