by shela
Here you are with another of what i call mystery line (there is no we), i have heard that like in 20 different poems of yours and yet i dont know what is the point of it, |
by Brittany C
Great poem as always:) Short or not it was a very good poem. 5/5 |
Aww.. its cute.. It's not how short or long a poem is.. its how you express your emotions through it. I think this is a 5/5 |
by Boy
My friend it realy touched my heart.that was great work take care 5/5 |
Wow!! |
by Fsams
To be honest this one is great and i have you 5/5. Its really short but with a nice picture in it. |
by Fsams
To be honest this one is great and i have you 5/5. Its really short but with a nice picture in it. |
I feel like it wasn`t one of your best . It`s still good, but not great . But I do like the feelings portrayed in this [: |
by Kaila
Wow |
by Live WeLL
Oh wow.. the ending was so unexpected and it is amazing how you changed the entire mood of the poem in just the last line.. such a short poem but SOOOO much meaning.. this is really an amazing poem and i loved it. Excellent job. Keep it up =] |
by Vanessa
Amazing twist at the end, perfectly written short, sad, and powerful. Alot of emtion for one so short. I really like this 5/5 |
Short ans sweet!! |
by Mousie
:( it's so sad, i hope everything is going ok over there. but it was a beautiful poem as it always is. your works could be two words long and still be a masterpiece, goran. great job, i look forward to hearing from you soon hopefully. |
I like the style of this piece-almost zen-like or something. The rhyme scheme is well done, subtle so that it doesn't take away from the powerful emotion of the poem. It is both sad and full of love at the same time. Well written. |
Sometimes just hearing the voice of the one we love can make the worst of days with living for. Fantastic job 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Aww. with an edit ill love this poem till there is not a single word that can be loved more. here let me help. err, well...ill just reword it a bit, but you dont have to go with it since its your poem. |