Comments : A Word

  • 17 years ago

    by shela

    Here you are with another of what i call mystery line (there is no we), i have heard that like in 20 different poems of yours and yet i dont know what is the point of it,
    but i must admit that this was a good one of yours.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem as always:) Short or not it was a very good poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Aww.. its cute.. It's not how short or long a poem is.. its how you express your emotions through it. I think this is a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    My friend it realy touched my heart.that was great work take care 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!
    Very sweet write..short and Simple...yet well written...Very happy start...cute indeed...but i loved the honesty towards the end1
    Great job!
    5/5 as always!=)
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    To be honest this one is great and i have you 5/5. Its really short but with a nice picture in it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    To be honest this one is great and i have you 5/5. Its really short but with a nice picture in it.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I feel like it wasn`t one of your best . It`s still good, but not great . But I do like the feelings portrayed in this [:

    My ears just hear
    The pain that my eyes see.
    `I love that .

    It`s short, simple, but sweet all the same .
    Nicely done .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow
    Very good
    I understand how even the littlest thing from this person makes you smile
    it's so good to feel that way
    I loved your imagery
    this poem was wonderful
    great job
    5/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Oh wow.. the ending was so unexpected and it is amazing how you changed the entire mood of the poem in just the last line.. such a short poem but SOOOO much meaning.. this is really an amazing poem and i loved it. Excellent job. Keep it up =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Amazing twist at the end, perfectly written short, sad, and powerful. Alot of emtion for one so short. I really like this 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Short ans sweet!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    :( it's so sad, i hope everything is going ok over there. but it was a beautiful poem as it always is. your works could be two words long and still be a masterpiece, goran. great job, i look forward to hearing from you soon hopefully.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like the style of this piece-almost zen-like or something. The rhyme scheme is well done, subtle so that it doesn't take away from the powerful emotion of the poem. It is both sad and full of love at the same time. Well written.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Sometimes just hearing the voice of the one we love can make the worst of days with living for. Fantastic job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww. with an edit ill love this poem till there is not a single word that can be loved more. here let me help. err, well...ill just reword it a bit, but you dont have to go with it since its your poem.

    Those moments when you were silent,
    The world began to dim,
    My ears would hear
    The pain my eye could see,
    But when your lip utter even a word,
    My heart cries in joy,
    Even if you say,
    "There is no we."

    =]