Living in Tenebrous Desolation

by DeathlyAmore   May 31, 2007


She stole my emotions along with my heart.
She tore me inside along with my life...
The memories of her kisses poison-be
Her angelic voice pierces and taunts... kills me...

Her fragrant perfume exasperates me.
Her notes excruciates me bitterly!
Her odorous poems agonizes my eyes!
Her words torture my cries...

Like a painful seal in my heart.
Like a tormenting tattoo in my arm.
Her soul and me has become one.
United eternally till' the stars shine does not shun...

And yet... I love to be this way...
It is a torture beyond impossible, it is... incomparable.
I shall live this way until reapers death... revealed.
My slow patient killer which I cannot see... but feel...

She stole my emotions along with my heart.
She tore me inside along with my life...
The memories of her kisses poison-be
Her angelic voice pierces and taunts... kills me...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    WOW Great Write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Her odorous poems agonizes my eyes!
    Her words torture my cries...

    These lines are overflowing with strong feelings and emotions. I can feel it very well. Its a beautifully written piece worth 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Emo

    That was rilly good i luved it i can totally connect wit the feelings there too 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Thank you both for the comments. If something did not rhyme. I shall go and fix it. Thank you both.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I liked this poem..very good write..powerful....and i like the last line...there was a lot of emotion in this work n u penned it well..though I am not sure about the structureof this one...I do think it was a nice read!
    Good job
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

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