Although i can say i liked the poem. the flow of it was inconsistant. some parts rhymed very well and flowed perfectly .. but others did not. ..

i did however like the repeating of the first stanza. i thought it added, or redid alot. or something.. i just liked it okay?!!? lol

I liked this poem..very good write..powerful....and i like the last line...there was a lot of emotion in this work n u penned it well..though I am not sure about the structureof this one...I do think it was a nice read!
Good job
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Thank you both for the comments. If something did not rhyme. I shall go and fix it. Thank you both.

That was rilly good i luved it i can totally connect wit the feelings there too 5/5

Her odorous poems agonizes my eyes!
Her words torture my cries...

These lines are overflowing with strong feelings and emotions. I can feel it very well. Its a beautifully written piece worth 5/5

WOW Great Write!