Wow!1....this one is beautiful..simple words used yet it has a positive effect on the poem..n i ca really relate to the emotion u've put in..
Great job!
5/5
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Yeah this is basically amazing. havent even raed your stuff in forever.. i realized that i commented on one abit ago from 2005 that i didnt remember.. but this one is marvelous. its really good.. and yeah. good write, yet a gain :)

Hmm its so short but full of nice words, its absolutely written well! i like some of ur worlds it really touch my heart.. it has a good flow.. well i think u've done a great job for a long years that u didnt write. excellent5/5

I like this one alot!

Yesterdays a good poem!!!