Slicing away at my wrists
I start to feel numb
Needing to feel the pain - I
Know I'll never see the sun
Tomorrow is just a fantasy
Only found in dreams
The reality is
Having blood flow from my wrist in streams
Every time I cut
Blood spills from my arms
Loving this feeling
Of self-harm
Only when I do this
Do I feel satisfied
Yearning for more - wanting to
Feel as though I've died
Losing all hope
Of living anymore
On my knees I sink
Right down to the bloody floor.
30May2007
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This was done for a contest
"Feel as though I've died
Loosing all hope
Of living anymore
On my knees I sink
Right down to the bloody floor."
In the second line of that stanza,
I think you mean Losing all hope.
I really liked this poem,
and I'm going to put it in the contest.
I found it to be full of emotions,
and I felt every word like it was happening to me. I love your expressions.
Keep up the amazing work.
5/5
-Heather