"Feel as though I've died
Loosing all hope
Of living anymore
On my knees I sink
Right down to the bloody floor."

In the second line of that stanza,
I think you mean Losing all hope.
I really liked this poem,
and I'm going to put it in the contest.
I found it to be full of emotions,
and I felt every word like it was happening to me. I love your expressions.
Keep up the amazing work.
5/5
-Heather