Our choices

by michael   May 31, 2007


The inner fire burns,
Consuming all it reaches,
Dark are the fires of hell,
As the walls of light it breaches,
Light the only savoir,
Comes in many forms,
Its power for whats right and wrong
And control over death.
The light gives us choices,
For feelings like love, forgives and will,
Dark consumes us all,
Which gives way to strong feelings to kill,
So now we have the choice,
To do whats right or wrong,
Can you make that choice?
For the light or for the dark!
I guess only time will tell.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Deep man deep. really deep. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 17 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Wow..thats really deep..I like it...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by What A Beautiful Lie

    Wow, this is a really powerful poem. It's just so well written and has so much meaning. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "So now we have the choice,
    To do whats right or wrong,
    Can you make that choice?
    For the light or for the dark!
    I guess only time will tell."

    I like the fact that you are comparing light and dark to right and wrong. This was a really interesting and attention grabbing write. Great job. Would definetly love to read more of your poetry.

    Take Care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    What a powerful poem.. i really like the words you chose to describe the differences between light and dark.. excellent write.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =].. oh yea. and that poem i wrote.. it was about a girl i know lol

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