What a powerful poem.. i really like the words you chose to describe the differences between light and dark.. excellent write.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =].. oh yea. and that poem i wrote.. it was about a girl i know lol

"So now we have the choice,
To do whats right or wrong,
Can you make that choice?
For the light or for the dark!
I guess only time will tell."

I like the fact that you are comparing light and dark to right and wrong. This was a really interesting and attention grabbing write. Great job. Would definetly love to read more of your poetry.

Take Care.

Wow, this is a really powerful poem. It's just so well written and has so much meaning. Great job!

Wow..thats really deep..I like it...5/5

Deep man deep. really deep. 5/5 ~KM~