by Jenni Marie May 31, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The sky is grey, clouds are black |
Honestly, this poem makes me wanna cry because of how true it is. War isn't funny and lost of innocent lives are taken every single day because of it. This isn't what God wanted...No it's not at all. I just hope that when the bad guys die, they understand their crimes...R.I.P to the heroes and angels who have died. May God bless your souls. |
by silvertung69
I wonde how close your soul has been |
When I read this I think about the Iraq war and think about all the innocent people who have been slaughtered and murdered. It is real eye opener of a poem and really conveys sorrow and loss well xxx alex xxx |
by Gizmo
Very good |
This poem felt slightly cliche to me which ruined the sad, raw and distraught feel you may have been trying to accomplish. |