With the words so many lives a waste is how i feel about war and the world nowadays it all sucks apart from the truely innocent where ever they are x benze x

Very well written

So true, really depicts reality of war in rawest form .Brilliant write.

Oh my gosh! This is an art piece! I love this poem its deep and emotional 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem .... It showed depth, emotion, truth and just overall it was a great poem which only has one word to describe it WOW!!!!!!

5/5
Chan
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Absolutely amazing. True poetry, true art. I have seen hundreds of poems, but this is by far the best poem i have ever seen. Ever. Deserves to be published.

There's a lot of good writing here - some a little contrived, some forced - I'm not sure who exactly "you" are in the piece. Are you the voice of us - the person suffering through all these hellish circumstances? Are we talking about September 11th? War? Columbine? All of them? I wanted more showing instead of telling us "I am in pain"

Imagery of this poem is outstanding. I like every stanza, you created superb, haunting atmosphere. Topic is excellent. 5/5

OO I like this poem, flow was nice and good use of words to create sonewhat a solid image in my head.

"How can some people be so cruel
To treat life as some kind of game?"
Found this true and it's sad how people actually treat life.

Looking forward to reading more of your writing. =D

-Bon

Wow!! this poem was very descriptive and i felt as if i witnessed it myself. very awesome poem. good job

Another great poem, you are an awesome writer

Again... really really good one.

This poem felt slightly cliche to me which ruined the sad, raw and distraught feel you may have been trying to accomplish.
Your rhyme and rhythm was well thought out but maybe you need to higher your vocabulary to pull off such a sad poem.

keep writing kiddo you have potential to be something we only dream to be.

Very good

When I read this I think about the Iraq war and think about all the innocent people who have been slaughtered and murdered. It is real eye opener of a poem and really conveys sorrow and loss well xxx alex xxx

I wonde how close your soul has been
to what your eyes have seen.
thank you.

Honestly, this poem makes me wanna cry because of how true it is. War isn't funny and lost of innocent lives are taken every single day because of it. This isn't what God wanted...No it's not at all. I just hope that when the bad guys die, they understand their crimes...R.I.P to the heroes and angels who have died. May God bless your souls.