Great poem...yeah simple..yet well penned...it's true...The message conveyed strongly...It's a fact everyone should realize
Great job!=)
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I LOVE the ending, it is so powerful and unique, has such great impact and is hardhitting.
I thought the flow was good throughout, and theimagery used created vivid pictures.

Very nicely done makes me awesome 5/5

This Is so good!! PPL Betta recycle after this. NO LITTERING!!!! I luv it man, seriously your 2 damn good!!

It was so interesting to read and so chilling words..but you like ideas?

She's sick,
she's dying now

I thought you used so many she's
and we can change them to those and it would look perfect because it looks a little mind boggling

So sick
Almost dying now

And it will add the poem a good look
But other than that I really liked it
Good job,
Laura

Woww. this is a great poem. i give it a 5/5. its strong and has strong emotions put in it too. keep writing the way you do

***ayshley***

WOW!!! This poem is incredible! Topic is amazing and message is great. Every line is written beautifully. I am impressed! Wording is also excellent. 5/5

Nice poem...