Another dream gone wrong

by bre   May 31, 2007


I feel like you love my best friend
i thought forever would never end
but you turned away, you said you'd always stay
i just wanted to be with you every single day
guess forever isn't as long as it used to be
because you said that you'll always love me
when you left i cried all night
i thought that i would never again see daylight
when you told her "i love you" i broke into two
because you were in love with her and i was still in love with you
I'm not afraid to say that i love you
I'm just sitting here hoping one day you'll feel the same way too.

*this was my first poem i wrote so.. plz.. tell me what you think.. and I'll return the favor.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    This is a great poem for your age... Very well written... you got real talent... keep it up... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    Don't u hate it when u see so many ppl have read ur poem but no one took the time to give it at least a vote!!! damn this gets on my nerves!!

    4/5... maybe a bit harsh considering ur age but i only judge the poem.