by wipeurtearsaway May 31, 2007
category :
Fun, humor /
relationships
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by jazmin
Girl I don't get the flow of ur poem...... I mean I get the part dat u say u hot....... but the rest just lost me...... consentrate on rhyming more...... how eva u spell it....... I give it a 2/5 sorry........ but keep trying....... practice makez perfect....... I bet u have it in u.... good luck |