Empty

by reborn   May 31, 2007


I'm searching
And yet I'm failing
Looking for something
That I just ain't getting
What is it exactly
That I feel I need in order to be happy
Something is missing
For there is too much emptiness I'm feeling
It's sad cuz it seems I'm cursed
And I feel like I'm about to burst
For every single time the girls I like are already taken
That's why I'm aching
For I know I would have stood a chance
If only I had met them at another point in time of their existence
For they were into me
But not available such a pity
It's so frustrating
Cuz it keeps on happening
Could barely hold myself back from kissing Joanne
Oh yeah it was pretty insane
So pretty and full of charm
Wanted her so bad in my arms
Had all these visions of kissing her
Catching her lips with mine but then blur
I had to take action and stop thinking about it
For what was the point I wasn't gonna do it
She's like a forbidden territory
And I'm not the kind of guy to start a tragedy
I will probably never get another opportunity
Good guys never win as you can see.

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  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Love the sentence of - she's like a
    forbidden territory.

  • 17 years ago

    by marilyn marti

    Hey! lol. I hope u dont hate me... :( I gave u 4/5. I really loved it, just not used to your style. But u did have those moments in the poem that were just like **BAM BAM** lol..it sounds better if u actually hear me saying it.lol. but yeah. good poem.aww. ur an awesome guy, n any girl that is lucky enough to be with you, oh god, do i congratulate her! lol. SEE, I AM SOOOO LUCKY TO BE UR FRIEND?(I AM UR FRIEND RIGHT? LOL)...u will find her, most definately. loved the poem-and oh, one more thing: Thank you sooo much again, u are really appreciative of my poems, and i really admire that.i think its soooo super-dupery sweet of you to leave comments on my poems. Well, take care, hope to talk to you later!

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I really like this one, good choice of words and well expressed emotions. You're good writer, I really don't know why you don't get feedback on your work. 5/5