I really like this one, good choice of words and well expressed emotions. You're good writer, I really don't know why you don't get feedback on your work. 5/5

Hey! lol. I hope u dont hate me... :( I gave u 4/5. I really loved it, just not used to your style. But u did have those moments in the poem that were just like **BAM BAM** lol..it sounds better if u actually hear me saying it.lol. but yeah. good poem.aww. ur an awesome guy, n any girl that is lucky enough to be with you, oh god, do i congratulate her! lol. SEE, I AM SOOOO LUCKY TO BE UR FRIEND?(I AM UR FRIEND RIGHT? LOL)...u will find her, most definately. loved the poem-and oh, one more thing: Thank you sooo much again, u are really appreciative of my poems, and i really admire that.i think its soooo super-dupery sweet of you to leave comments on my poems. Well, take care, hope to talk to you later!

Love the sentence of - she's like a
forbidden territory.