Yes I really wrote this, my husband is in Iraq right now. Thank you both for commenting it means a lot to me. =)
and Eline, your english is not bad at all =)

wow, that was realy good, i am happy that it was just dream. stay strong he will come back to you, one of my good friends had fiance in Iraq, he came back and they were marreid, i believe the same thing will happen with you, great poem and take care of yourself

Great poem there Princess

I love all your poems and especially this one! Good job!

I'm sorry if you had to go through this, but the poem's just ok. I hope you have better ones.

Nice poem.....
really touched my heart... i hope u keep writtin and that your husband comes back to u....
god bless!!!

i hope he comes back safely to your arms...
just keep him in your prayers and all will work out...
can u plz read and comment on sum of my poems...
much luv

Thank you to all who have commented and saying that you will pray for my husband, it really means a lot to me. He is in Iraq right now, and it's very scary, some days are better than others but all I can do is take it day by day and just sit and wait for him to come home again. Thank you again to all of you. =)

I LOVED YOUR POEM IT WAS REALLY DEEP AND IT REALLY TOUCH ME

Thank you to all of you, you dont know how much it means to me to hear what you think about my writings and to say such nice things to try to keep my spirits up. My husband is also in Fallujah and it's scary cus that is one of the most herd on the news. I leave him in the hands of God, but it's scares me so much to think I might loose him, no matter what problems we are going through I still couldn't bare to loose him like that. Thank you again =)

your poem is BEAUTIFUL, it mad me cry so much cuz i kno how u feel, i have my brother and cousins out there at war and i fear everyday, that they will never come back...... wow, you really have a great poem...i dont kno what else to say... but.. you have great talent.