I like the beat and flow so far. I think it will turn out to be a great poem! I'd love to see it after you finish it. So far...5/5

This is really good i can't wait to read the rest

I reallllllllyyyyyyy like this.
Is it about anyone in particular?
Tell the truth. =D
Awww I likes it.

I like it

very well written and it does have a flow to it lol
x

Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!

Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!
Write the rest!

Brill so far BTW hehe.