Hooked

by Natalie   May 31, 2007


I've hung and tied the ropes of my past,
Looked into your eyes, fell way too fast,
Hooked on toxic narcotics from hearts,
Beating as one, this is where love starts.

Words from lips travel to destined ears,
Hands so dry wipe away cryptic tears,
Exposing strong feelings cloaked inside,
Showing me happiness when faith died.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    Hey this one is better than your other one imo, it was relly great. It had a powerful message and i loved it.
    5/5

    Oscar

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Heyy nataliee i hvnt read a poem of urs in ages. this was good as!!! u always use such interesting words to express urself. keep it up!! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Passionate

    Wow me and my friend tiffani love this :) its sooo amazing nice job
    <3 sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awe i remember what it was like to be in that honeymoon period lol :) thank you for making me smile a lil i gave this lil heartfelt poem 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was rather delightful to read. Thank you for sharing, once again, your talent with us. =]

    Regards,
    Debbie

    5/5