Wow Tracy!
Great job! So much emotion coming from this piece. Imagery and flow are excellent.

Two hearts in love
feeling that run deep
air filled with passion
memories that you keep.

This stanza is so heartfelt. Memories help us hold on.
Take care Cindy

Hey tracy,
I love this poem, the rhyming and the flow are done great, I enjoyed reading it, you definitely deserve a 5/5 from me,
kisses stephanie