Moments become Memories

You got me man. You got me hooked on this one. Wow. I wish I had written something like this. These were my exact thoughts. But I guess I lack the creative power. Amazing, I mean it.

The images in this are beautiful, and the way you have worded this is pure poetry. This poem really stops and makes you think... and feel. I especially love the last two stanzas. A great poem indeed.

Peace, Poetry & Power,
Gary Jurechka

Wow, I really liked it. I think your point was very powerfull. It's inspiring poems like that, that make mme want to write. The only thing I didn't like, was how the stanzas were off. I knwo I have no room to talk though because most of mine are too. It w3asnt until I got on this site that I even knew about things like that. Some people can pull it off, and others can't. You did it well. This was one of those poems I did not want to end. lol keep it up. I was looking for somone to comment my poems, adn I remembered how honest you were, and such a good poet, so I chose you. lol you are in my favorites. well God bless

~skittles

This really captures a lot at once, and its a nice read (there are a lot of poems that have a ton in a few words that are like eating a stale swedish fish when you read them - you feel like you have to chew for an hour, and digest for longer! this was not like that at all!)

This was absolutely a heartwarming read.