Ouch O.o Dang thats a fantastic poem and just..... Ouch! I have to admit that I do this every so often *sigh* alright a lot =(
Anyway, I really loved this one and it's by far one of your best *and thats saying something lols* You really do have a talent for writing =) I hope that I can be just half as good as you someday =)
Keep them coming because i really love reading them ^_^
Rhea