Crying, Waiting, Hoping

by *Charisma*   May 31, 2007


It frustrates me because you must know
They way I feel for you
So don't pretend or fake innocence
The facade is through

If you love me, here's one last chance
Before I turn away
I've never been good at playing games
That has yet to change

This half-hand hold is killing me
So let go or hold tight
I won't be a decision you can't make
We are wrong or right

I'm through crying, waiting, hoping
This is the final straw
Profess your love or choke it down
Keep it or withdraw

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Well i guess you are through waiting, watching, wishing. Great job. Just change They to the in the first stanza, second line. Other than th, it was great. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Exactly godmanit! lol I so agree with that! :) well said i hope he gets the idea ;) 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVE IT!!!! Whoohoo! I'm so proud of yah kid! Lol! This is what I've been waiting for...this poem rocks! And I love this line ESPECIALLY!
    -This half-hand hold is killing me
    So let go or hold tight-
    That was a perfect picture to describe this feeling. Amazing job, girl!!! :) :) :) 1,000,000/5!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by kedra08

    Hey i like your poem but u have some miss some words. but other then that it was good.

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