Hey i like your poem but u have some miss some words. but other then that it was good.

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVE IT!!!! Whoohoo! I'm so proud of yah kid! Lol! This is what I've been waiting for...this poem rocks! And I love this line ESPECIALLY!
-This half-hand hold is killing me
So let go or hold tight-
That was a perfect picture to describe this feeling. Amazing job, girl!!! :) :) :) 1,000,000/5!
~Midnight Sun

Exactly godmanit! lol I so agree with that! :) well said i hope he gets the idea ;) 5/5 :)

Well i guess you are through waiting, watching, wishing. Great job. Just change They to the in the first stanza, second line. Other than th, it was great. 5/5
-vino