The pure light that is you

by claire   May 31, 2007


Most people I've known
are translucent
coloring, dulling the light
some empty ones are even opaque
casting shadows wherever they alite

but you're clear
so transparent and true
flooding the world
with pure light that is you

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  • 17 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Beautiful adored it although it was a bit short 5/5 for a truely remarkable and inspiring piece

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    I absolutely adore this piece. It endears me completely. And I have nothing to critique about it except that it's simply breathtaking. Wonderfully done, dear. 5/5 =] Keep on writing.

    all the best and take care.

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