Amazing poem anddd meaning.
"There's a rumor about a revolution that will shakes your guns and ammunition,"
^^ I absolutely loved that line plus the last stanza.

The more I think about this poem, the more I like it. Lol.

Amazing poem anddd meaning.
"There's a rumor about a revolution that will shakes your guns and ammunition,"
^^ I absolutely loved that line plus the last stanza.

The more I think about this poem, the more I like it. Lol.

For this line: There's a rumor about a revolution that will shakes your guns and ammunition,
I think you mean SHAKE your guns insted of shake. I liked the message you were giving in this poem. It really relates to people in real life. Whether to fight for what you stand for and risk loosing or getting in trouble or to kind of stand aside and hope for the best. That's what I got out of it at least. Overall I think it's a four. Maybe it was just the way you wrote it but for whatever reason I just wanted a little more from the poem.