Eeek!
Goosebumps. I loved it.
Every line was so descriptive and great.

"She told him to use the door meant for leaving while she's young."

That line sorta confused me.
Ima read over it another few times and see if I figure it out =]

Good job, this was really well written.

I whispered: "Pretend you don't know I seen through your disguise."

That line made me..
laugh. in a way.
Not that it was bad or anything.
Just because.. I know the feeling?
Yeah, well. .. another wonderful poem.

4.6/5

Wonderful poem chilling

Read what Lisa said....thats what I have to say =D

Good job
5/5