Awesome poem. story like, which always makes a poem good. LOL i thought that the poem was going to be about the kids on the bus. but it turned out that the character was just gonig insane. idk, maybe i'm just making myself look stupid. haha
anways, it was good. no critisim
-The writer

I think everyone goes through things like this from time to time! I think you express better than most! 5/5