Rain On A Sunny Day

by MischieviousMya   May 31, 2007


I know that I'm too blind to see
this little black cloud that rains on me.
I want to be noticed, good or bad
A kind of feeling that I've never had.
Accepted or not, who cares but me
Trying to be all that I can be.
An adrenaline rush to keep me sane
He isn't my supply of weed or cocaine
This hasn't been happening for very long
But this feeling I have seems oh so wrong.
I dont know what normal is, but willing to change
Afraid of becoming something out of range.
I forgot who I am and how to live,
This Mormon religion that just won't give.
A life worth living as a basket case.
These terrible dreams i want to erase.

[["He isn't my supply of weed or cocaine" = I don't need a guy to be the drug i cant resist.]]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a ggreat write. it was heartfelt and i absoultely loved the title, it fit well..

    I know that I'm too blind to see
    this little black cloud that rains on me.

    i enjoyed those two lines the most. a great opening for a poem such as this. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    This is a good poem - a tiny bit confusing but v well written! def 5/5 - very original and poetic (my criteria for poetry)
    ~claire

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