This is a good poem - a tiny bit confusing but v well written! def 5/5 - very original and poetic (my criteria for poetry)
~claire

This was a ggreat write. it was heartfelt and i absoultely loved the title, it fit well..

I know that I'm too blind to see
this little black cloud that rains on me.

i enjoyed those two lines the most. a great opening for a poem such as this. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.