by John Jun 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
When you answer and say you can't talk |
by ASH
I like this ALOT i know how it feels and i HATE those words they are evil lol |
by Jenna
I really like this one...your very talented. i feel that same way a lot. keep up the good work :-] |
I guess it seemed a little...'rough' to read cuz there's some flow probs. Nothing spectacular but it did hold an emotional appeal and a wonder of what the four words could be. If you care third line 'sacres' = 'scares'. I guess going for words or flow this one doesn't have that edge to make it great but it does have that curious wonder of the four words. |
by Kali
This is a really good poem....I liked it! I don't like those four words either or even saying them! |
by SHoRTy
What words???? |