Hey was thea any particular reason you wrote this??

wel funy i read it bcus it preeety much sums up wat i wana say to some stupid girl in my class at the mo .....

Its awsome explicit and beautiful. Put a smile on your face coz I gave u 5/5:-)

Haha this poem is awesome, I just went through the same thing with my best friend for like 10 years, He lied to me and stole my money, the trust was totally gone, and that's key in relationships. Excellent poem as always, great flow, and good humour even if it wasn't intended lol 5/5

You put a msile on my face when you said i expressed anger but i look at this and its makes me ectastic to screw up someones day
great work -
raindrops 5/5