I really enjoyed this poem b/c I love nice even flow and rhyme, but it's a bit cliche. I've read so many just like this... I written so many just like this. I give it a 4/5. Can you do me a small favor and change the titled to "desolate"? You'll really be doing yourself a favor b/c half of all poems are titled "Alone". lol Just friendly advice. Thanks for the comment.
PV

Wow all of the words are so deep. I liked it! Nice.

Excellent choice of words...beautiful deep work!..It flowed well n the rhyme scheme is good..Loved it!
5/5
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