Oh god,
this was more than perfect. the reason is i wish i could tell this truth to the person i loved my whole life and yet she tells me (there is no we) many times i want to tell my heart to accept the reality but cannot. but now you have gave me some courage hopefully.
a great write dear. keep it up. 5/5

Perfectly written, strong emtion, nice word choice, I really liked it it was diffrent than most poems of this type, Great job 5/5

I'm sick of you. I'm over you.
We don't belong together.
You should just accept that,
Instead of forcing us to be forever

----powerful and beautifully written...each stanza was capturing and written lovely----

.-*tara*-.

Sometimes we kind of try and force the whole forever talk, I mean people say forever in relationships everyday, but 99% don't last 6 months. We have to realize that no matter how perfect things seem to be, they won't just be perfect forever, it takes more then 2 months to see all there is to see in somebody - give love time. Amazing job as always 5/5

Wow.. this was a really good poem!
i can relate to it~ because of the things im going through in life right now~ so it helps out~
Nice job, you have a great talent~!
5/5

This is good - great rhyme n rhythm n all that. not to mention it was really true and well expressed :)