I loved the poem and think you don't need to change a thing!~~Twiggy~~

So true. I love this poem. It is short, sweet, and to the point. It is hard to write short poems and this shows real talent. Keep writing, you'll be one of the best one of these days.

Short,sweet and to the point, the flow was once again excellent as always and your poems are always very heartfelt and true. Excellent job Sara you deserve nothing less then 5/5 GG23