Hey this is really great :D
the repetition works totally well
and it expresses alot of emotion :]
looking forward to anything new put up :P
5/5 x

Great poem!!:]

Good poem : ) i like the whole repetition thing ...
<3 jess

Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

keep it the great writting

Chan
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Wow this is good