Just a suggestion...but for what ever reason the abbreviations don't show up on the website...try taking them out and turning them into the real words so it is easier to read...5/5 from other than that!

great job!

Love my fellow poet
~Shannon~

~if u get the chance read a couple of my poems too..thanks much!~

This is good poem, but little hard to read with those copy/paste mistakes. Anyway, well written 5/5

Good poem..well penned..
But there are pretty lot of typos which i think is creating a tad mess to the poem's look..Consider revising the work..Just a thought!
it's a great write anyways=)
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

I loved the poem i could feel your pain...~~Twiggy~~

Wow, interesting poem. I like it.

It's very cutting. You don't play around with the subject and you force a confrontation with the reader from the outset. Very bold and very honest. This indeed is on the road to healing.