by IdTakeABulletForYou Jun 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You make me want to wish on stars |
by uwouldntno
OMG i love this peom...its a great poem...well written and everything. Flawless. (Well i think so anyway |
by Kalee
This is a wonderful poem. it was well written. 5/5 |
by xo kisses xo
I love this one! i can relate to this. its soo true! 5/5!! |
by Lets Keep it A Surprise
This, I can relate to so much. When I was younger then I am now, like maybe in 3rd grade, I would always wish on the star that my new crush would have a crush on me, and like in fairytales, live happily ever after. But fate is a B!^@# isn't it? Leaving you to try and grasp what isn't going to be yours, teasing your emotions and whatnot. |
Beautiful piece, excellently written. I'm big fan of your work. Keep writing. 5/5 (as always). |