Wow great poem its so sad. Youve put effort and emotion into this one, and it makes it so better to read. great job :)

~priceless emotion ~

This by far in my opinion is truly your best. You speak of the pain so many have endured and yet still live with because of the life the parents choose to raise us in. These are the most amazing stanzas that stuck out in this poem.

Feel all my pain
thats locked deep inside
so climb on board
take yourself a ride.

Before you think about it
listen to your heart
because once in my mind
life will fall apart.

Depression is my brother
pain from the father
lost in this world
child with no mother.

^^ This has got to be the most disturbing line I have read in any of your poetry. It cuts to the chase and lets us realize how relative the depression is. Truly wonderful job reflecting the pain and wish for none to take a walk in those shoes. They surely would go insane.
As always I wish you the best.
Your Friend,
Kay

WOW i really don't know what to say about this one. I Love all of your poems so far that I have read. It seems like I can relate to all of them. Drinking in a family has caused a lot. You have given me a lot to write about. That I just have never thought about writting. Keep up the good work 5/5

Love your poem full of emotions there is always something in life sad to deal with your friend Steve

Another very nice write!
god bless

~Depression is my brother
pain from the father
lost in this world
child with no mother.~

I like the flow of this, great choice of words that were joined together!

Wow this poem was great not about what happened i mean but it has emotion and it sends a message keep it up and take care
carly