Wow!...good poem..well penned..i liked the repetiton of "Six, three, four, five, seven, eight, nine:" had agood effect on the message and the content in the poem...Great job!
5/5
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xxPoojaxx

Ohhh...so heartbreaking and yet so beautifully and elegantly written...I have tears in my eyes...
The opening is very powerful and it gets better and better from there on, the emotion and depth are clear for the reader to see, and the ending is so beautiful and touching.
Imagery is great, and flow is flawless throughout.

This was overall a good poem, nice idea, but the random numbers are kind of weird for me. You made them rhyme, however, and I liked that. I think the title could be a little better though.