Wow!!.excellent poem.really beautiful..Great flow..and the message conveyed is so true...Something which every one must realize t live a better tomorrow
Great job!
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I enjoy the flow of your poem. Some of the rhyming seems mildly forced but nothing that is overly distracting. The message conveyed is powerful to say the least. I might rewrite it one more time were I, you just to smooth out the meter a bit but the poem on the whole is absoluteley marvelous. A job well done.

I can't believe no one has voted on this one yet. At first, I didn't get why it was in the inspirational section, but now I see why. :] . I love the story line behind this, it sends out a very good message and I am glad that I was given the opportunity to read a poem like this, it is hard to find a writer who can take a look at society and write about it like you have; kudos on that.

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